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- In the introduction in brief narrate the theory behind’ Vasudhaiva Kutumbakam’.
- In the body discuss the concept of ‘Vasudhaiva Kutumbakam’ first.
Explain that Indian family system discourages individualism and encourages collectivism. India has grown and attained its current stature under the strong and supportive framework of its joint family system. Also explain that with the advent of urbanization and modernization, even in India, joint families are being fragmented. But the principle of Vasudhaiva Kutumbakam still is a guiding beacon for our society. - Conclude that Change is inevitable. Whatever the family system be, the core values that sustained and nourished Indian families for centuries together must never be compromised.
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Hi Kanchi
Good introduction.
Content wise good attempt.
Making flow chart in describing challenges is appreciable.
In the significance also mention – To unite and seek support of world family to fight and deal with cross-border terrorism.
Good content.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep working hard.