- Mentor’s comment-
- The question basically has three parts-First parts makes a factual statement which links vulnerability with disaster impact and its threat for the people. In the second part of the question, we are asked to characterise the vulnerability. The third part asks to discuss the types of vulnerabilities.
- In the intro, define what you understand by the vulnerability to disaster.
- In the body in the first part write about how vulnerability can be characterised for example scientific approach, policy approach etc.
- In the second part of the answer discuss different types of vulnerability like-physical, social, economic, environmental etc.
- Conclude by underlining the importance of assessment of vulnerability in effective disaster preparedness.
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The overall answer is decent.
Good discussion in the main body.
Good structure.
Good intro.
The way forwards are deep.
You can use flowcharts in the main body to make your presentation better and get better space management.
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The answer is incomplete and ends abruptly.
You have just discussed various aspects of vulnerability.
You have to mention way forwards in the end and a proper conclusion.
That will make your answer complete and give a proper structure.
The 1st part of the answer is well handled.
Good content there.
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The 2nd part of the answer is well attempted.
Good elements in that discussion.
Decent conclusion.
The overall main body is well attempted.
The explanation is fine
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The answer is quite decent.
The content is rich and well placed.
But with your current presentation style, the Full-Length Tests may become monotonous for the examiner.
Hence start using some sort of flowcharts, box styled discussions or images. That will bring the X-Factor in your answers.
Underline imp words.
The conclusion is very good.