The individual is the first building block of the value architecture. The values that a person holds have been derived from family, friends, neighbors, teachers, mass media and so on.
- The family value system inculcates the moral values of tolerance, non-violence, sympathy, compassion, harmony, etc.
- But the development of values and the sense of one’s duty towards the nation, community and one’s self, and thinking skills do not find any place in the curriculum at any stage of a child’s development. As a consequence, there are explicit signs of erosion of values in practically every sphere of our life.
- There is a circular relationship between individual and society in these respects in so far as individual behavior determines the way society moves and social values drive men the way they behave, each reinforcing the other.
- Hence the erosion of values at the individual level creates a vicious cycle of erosion of values in all spheres which ultimately destroys the whole nation.
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Decent coverage through flowchart in the 1st part of the main body where you discussed the significance of family values.
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The structure of the answer is quite decent.
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The examples are too general and weak.
You have to give better examples than these. These are too subjective and do not connect with the demand of the question.
I mean how does Mr Tharoor asking his party men to control their emotions is linked to the family value system or how does the advisory by the home ministry indicates a good value system in the family.
Hence get your examples right.
The 1st part of the answer has decent content.
Do discuss how does the erosion of values at the individual level creates a vicious cycle of erosion of values in all spheres which ultimately destroys the whole nation.
Create a better link between the value system and all these spheres of life, both positively and negatively.
Read the answers of Swetha and Sahithya to get the understanding on how to approach the answer.
The model answer has brief talking points regarding the direction of the content. You can also take help from there.