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- Begin with brief write up on what you understand by linguistic diversity in Indian context.
- In the body explain that in India, there are more than 200 languages, being spoken by different groups. There exists ‘linguistic pluralism’ in India, which is a state of ‘mutual existence’ of several languages in a contiguous space. Discuss the factors responsible for diversity in the languages. Explain the relevance of official languages.
- Conclude with need to preserve such rich heritage of the country.
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Hi Divya
Good introduction.
In the linguistic diversity, club two paragraphs in one.
How official language issue is a reason for linguistic diversity ?
Instead of this point, you can write that the concept of protecting the interest of children to get basic
education in their mother tongue aids in linguistic diversity of India.
Steps suggested to promote the diversity are discussed in a decent manner.
Good conclusion.
Keep working hard !