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- In the introduction first define what social movements are and in what way they are often expression of protests.
- In the body explain the underlying factors responsible for them such as social movements arise because social conditions create dissatisfaction with the existing system. The recent example can be seen in the protest movements that griped the countries like Egypt, Syria etc which led to change in political system. Give exmples of India also.
- Conclude with importance of it.
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Hi Kanchi
Good intro.
Features are well discussed, you can also add violent or non violent.
You have good hold over content, keep enriching it.
Demand of the answer is met.
Decent structure.
Use of various examples is appreciable.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Zulu
Answer is well started.
You have discussed the features in a decent manner, try to use subheadings.
Refrain from long paragraphs, write in points while giving headings and subheadings.
Good content but need to substantiate it with examples like Al-Qaida, ISIS.
Decent strucutre.
Underline keywords.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Bhupender
Good intro.
Leave some space between the paragraphs.
Features are well discussed.
After the features. you can give a heading- Social Movements in form of Protest.
Content wise good attempt, need to work on presentation.
Underline keywords and refrain from long paragraphs.
Keep writing.