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And you do not need to discuss all the principles of Nolan.
Here, you need to explain in brief the principles of public life like Selflessness, integrity, objectivity, accountability, openness, honesty, leadership. Then pick any three among them and explain with examples.
Example:
Integrity: A.P.J Abdul Kalam has borne travel expenses (to come to his swearing-in ceremony) for his family in his personal capacity.
Honesty: Shanmugam Manjunath a sales officer (grade A officer) for the Indian Oil Corporation had performed his duty honestly by sealing a corrupt petrol station in UP for selling adulterated fuel, though it led to his murder later.
Leadership: Armstrong pame leading the way in constructing the 100km road.
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Example:
Integrity: A.P.J Abdul Kalam has borne travel expenses (to come to his swearing-in ceremony) for his family in his personal capacity.
Honesty: Shanmugam Manjunath a sales officer (grade A officer) for the Indian Oil Corporation had performed his duty honestly by sealing a corrupt petrol station in UP for selling adulterated fuel, though it led to his murder later.
Leadership: Armstrong pame leading the way in constructing the 100km road.
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Before discussing the Nolan principles, explain what is public life briefly.
You kept the answer short and simple and that is a good element.
The content is fine and well structured.
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Whenever writing ethics answers, always make sure that you have given examples in each point.
Otherwise, there is no point in explaining those points.
And you do not need to discuss all the principles of Nolan.
Here, you need to explain in brief the principles of public life like Selflessness, integrity, objectivity, accountability, openness, honesty, leadership. Then pick any three among them and explain with examples.
Example:
Integrity: A.P.J Abdul Kalam has borne travel expenses (to come to his swearing-in ceremony) for his family in his personal capacity.
Honesty: Shanmugam Manjunath a sales officer (grade A officer) for the Indian Oil Corporation had performed his duty honestly by sealing a corrupt petrol station in UP for selling adulterated fuel, though it led to his murder later.
Leadership: Armstrong pame leading the way in constructing the 100km road.
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The direction of the answer is very good.
The content is fine.
The examples are well placed.
They are a good point in your answer.
Keep it up.
Well structured.
Work on your presentation
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The content lacks maturity and especially the examples.
They are either not explained well or lack the connect with the question.
Hence try to frame better examples.
Example:
Integrity: A.P.J Abdul Kalam has borne travel expenses (to come to his swearing-in ceremony) for his family in his personal capacity.
Honesty: Shanmugam Manjunath a sales officer (grade A officer) for the Indian Oil Corporation had performed his duty honestly by sealing a corrupt petrol station in UP for selling adulterated fuel, though it led to his murder later.
Leadership: Armstrong pame leading the way in constructing the 100km road.
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Decent content.
It is well explained and short and crisp.
The content is not preachy at all.
It is relevant and well presented.
the examples are also fine but do not use the content as it is. Frame them in your own language! 😛
Well attempted answer overall.