Mentor’s comment-
- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/editorials/ the-g-in-ngo-6608158/ - In the intro, mention the difficulty of regulating the money coming from abroad in the country.
- In the body, mention the changes introduced and how it could help in increasing the monitoring of the foreign donations received by the non-profit organisations.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to balance between the concerns of the organisations and need for the transparency.
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Hi Samiksha
First thing, refrain from monotony, leave some space between the paragraphs.
Good introduction.
Content in the first part of the answer is good but in the second part, write about that how this bill is bringing Licence-Raj on NGOs.
Then write some significance of NGOs in India.
Conclusion is good.
Diversify your answer.
Work on presentation.
Keep working hard !