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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ privacy-policy-online-consent- illegible-7150434/ - In the intro, mention the importance of securing the privacy of the user in the online realm with the growing importance of user data.
- In the body, explain the growing importance of user data and so the importance of users consent while sharing such data. Next, mention the problems in giving consent to the online privacy policies like these policies are full of legal jargon, they are not designed for easy reading, these policies are almost exclusively in English. In the suggestion, mention use of simple language, use of multiple languages, regulation of such policies, making such policies revocable etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to give the user greater control over there privacy in the realm of the internet.
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Hi Sandeep
Scan your sheet in proper light.
Good intro.
Write neat and legible , your heading after the introduction is not legible.
Some good points but need to work more on content, read comprehensively for it.
Good conclusion.
Work on presentation and use subheadings.
Persistence is the key to success, keep working hard.
Hi Sandeep
Good intro.
You have good hold over content, need to improve the presentation to fetch better marks.
Improve handwriting and give proper subheadings to present your answer in a better strucutred manner.
Good conclusion.
Try to write all the four answers on a daily basis.