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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/lead/a-development- that-will-hardly-put-india-at- ease/article32481836.ece - In the intro, mention the ‘Doing Business’ report of the World Bank.
- In the body, mention flaws in the Index like lack of predictive power, de jure indicators, lack of theoretical basis etc. In the implications mention improvement in ranking by methodical changes, lack of correlation between ranking and output growth etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to rethink the methodology of ranking.
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Hi Samiksha
Good introduction but do mention the report name.
You have explained the shortcomings in a decent manner.
After writing the challenges, write the way forward, you can write that India should work towards coming up with a domestic policy measure to not only encourage foreign investments but also empower the already existing domestic players with easier business opportunities.
Conclusion is good but need to summarise it.
Work on presentation, underline important stuff.
Some good points but read comprehensively to enrich your content.
Persistence is the key to success,keep writing,you will succeed.