Mentor’s comment:
- In the intro, briefly state how both the countries have the post of president but with entirely different roles.
- In the body, explain the broad similarities like the adoption of the quasi-judicial process by both the Houses, along with the similarities also elaborate on the differences in the process and the criteria for the Impeachment.
- In conclusion, state the importance of the process in a democracy.
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There is an issue with the structure as the conclusion is missing.
The 1st of the answer is decently handled.
The tabular form of discussion is very good.
But do discuss the difference between the two nations’ impeachment process with more depth.
You have passed it off as your conclusion which makes the answer end abruptly. It affects your conclusion.
The overall explanation is fine.
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