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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/tax- economy-contraction-covid-19- 6585751/ - In the body mention the lower tax to GDP ratio in India.
- In the body, mention the various reasons for low collection like lack of enforcement, complexity of the system, loopholes in the laws, tendency towards tax evasion and compliance etc. In the measures mention- simplification of tax system, enforcement, encouragement, simplification of the procedure, increasing awareness etc.
- Conclude mentioning the importance of robust tax base for any country to prosper.
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Hi Samiksha
Along with the data in the introduction, write briefly about tax collection also.
Reasons are well explained, keep it up.
After the reasons and before writing the measures, write about the impact of this low tax collection.
Use different subheadings for this.
In the measures part,you can also give international examples like of South Korea which give rewards to motivate people to pay tax like reduced public transportation fares etc .
Diversify your content.
Work on concluding remarks.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep writing !