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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/combating- vaccine-hesitancy/ article33854364.ece - In the intro, define vaccine hesitancy.
- In the body, mention causes such as misinformation, superstition, lack of knowledge etc. In the measures mention awareness campaign, tackling misinformation on social media etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the importance of vaccination to defeat the covid.
@Parth
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Hi Surya
Good intro.
You have discussed the causes and measures in a decent manner.
Content is good, try giving subheadings.
In the conclusion you can also write that our collective goal as a healthcare team is to do what is in the best interest of the patient because, as American author John C. Maxwell has taught us, “Teamwork makes the dream work.”
Good structure.