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- In the introduction briefly define what knowledge-centric development is .
- In the body explain the situations of the current times, its impact on urban and rural regions of the country.
Discuss the effect of pandemic on the distress migration in the country. Discuss – with emphasis on capability and capacity building of rural youth in terms of holistic education, appropriate technology and enhanced livelihood, there is a possibility for a more balanced distribution of income as well as population. - Conclude that bridging the knowledge gap between a city and a village would also bridge the income gap between the two, and lead to a faster bridging of the gap between the average individual
income in India and that in industrially advanced countries.
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Hi Dakshina
Need to rephrase your introduction.
You need to work upon headings, ‘leveling up the field’ is not making any sense, ‘characteristics ‘ of what ?
Be specific while writing.
Explain the situations of the current pandemic times, its impact on urban and rural regions of the
country.
Explain what do you mean by knowledge economy.
Need to add some more points in the way forward,you can write that there is a need for knowledge bridges to be built between cities and villages.
Improve your content.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting, write neat and legible.
Keep writing !
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Hi Shubham
Good introduction.
Give proper headings and subheadings to present your answer in a better form, refrain from monotony.
Define what do you mean by knowledge economy.
Rest of the content is good and well placed.
Good conclusion.
Improve your writing language.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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