In terms of the content, your content is really awesome.
You have covered various elements required in the discussion.
But the only issue there is that you have not given examples in each part.
The language is fine and the explanation is on the expected lines.
The balance is perfect in all parts of the answer.
Good attempt all in all.
A public servant is generally a person who is employed directly or indirectly by the government, either through appointment or election. This is the definition of a public servant.
You mentioned things about consolidated funds of India. Please avoid such factual and conceptual mistakes at this level. Especially in the starting of your answer. You have to make sure that your every statement is of a certain maturity and correct.
What is the point of pointing about the service rules?
Sudama please do not answer anything which is not the demand of the question.
You were supposed to discuss “expected role of the public servant.” But you discussed some general statements while there were many important expected roles that a public servant has to play.
For example:
Public Servants have an obligation to protect and promote our constitutional ideals enshrined in the preamble, to uphold the rule of law, dispense administrative justice and ensure administrative facilitation.
As an elite segment of society, public servants have an important role in informing and even formulating public opinion and perception on various issues.
The public servant should be emphatic as also advised by Mahatma Gandhi’s that if anyone was in doubt if an action was good or not was to put oneself in the situation of the poorest of the poor in the country and see how a particular policy and programme will impact him or her.
S/He should also be ‘efficient’ as administrators occupying positions of power and authority, it is their responsibility to translate policies into programmes, to implement schemes on the ground.
They need to be agile in their thoughts and actions. For eg. they should be able to access the latest information and knowledge and use them for improving service delivery.
They should be impartial and incorruptible as also observed by Sardar Patel and should work for an inclusive national development as mandated by the Constitution.
They should behave in a dignified manner and have the ability to patiently listen and take a balanced view. They must eschew arrogance and authoritarianism and be able to approach even the most intractable issues and irritants with a calm demeanour.
In each case, you have to give examples in ethics answers. That is a must.
A very good intro.
While you discussed various points in the 2nd part of the answer, the example is missing at each point.
That is not the ideal case.
Ethics answers need ample amount of examples in static portions.
Hence make it a point of giving some real-life examples.
The language is decent and well explained points
From where are you guys getting this idea of the consolidated fund of India and public servant? A peon in your municipality is also a public servant but h/she is not getting a salary from CFI? Isn’t it?
Please avoid such factual and conceptual mistakes at this level. Especially in the starting of your answer. You have to make sure that your every statement is of a certain maturity and correct.
A public servant is generally a person who is employed directly or indirectly by the government, either through appointment or election. This is the definition of a public servant.
The 2nd part os better.
But do give proper examples in each case.
Good explanation.
Not to provide what? The intro statement is perhaps incomplete.
It is good that you discussed the discussion of various thinkers on the expected roles of a public servant as well.
This will give credence to your whole answer while giving you an edge over others.
Keep it up.
Very good content all in all.
The explanation is superb.
The structure and direction are nice.
Hi Aruna
Sorry but the program is off hence the answers submitted for backdated AWEs cannot be reviewed as of now. The new phase will start from June onwards and you can get the details from here:
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In terms of the content, your content is really awesome.
You have covered various elements required in the discussion.
But the only issue there is that you have not given examples in each part.
The language is fine and the explanation is on the expected lines.
The balance is perfect in all parts of the answer.
Good attempt all in all.
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A public servant is generally a person who is employed directly or indirectly by the government, either through appointment or election. This is the definition of a public servant.
You mentioned things about consolidated funds of India. Please avoid such factual and conceptual mistakes at this level. Especially in the starting of your answer. You have to make sure that your every statement is of a certain maturity and correct.
What is the point of pointing about the service rules?
Sudama please do not answer anything which is not the demand of the question.
You were supposed to discuss “expected role of the public servant.” But you discussed some general statements while there were many important expected roles that a public servant has to play.
For example:
Public Servants have an obligation to protect and promote our constitutional ideals enshrined in the preamble, to uphold the rule of law, dispense administrative justice and ensure administrative facilitation.
As an elite segment of society, public servants have an important role in informing and even formulating public opinion and perception on various issues.
The public servant should be emphatic as also advised by Mahatma Gandhi’s that if anyone was in doubt if an action was good or not was to put oneself in the situation of the poorest of the poor in the country and see how a particular policy and programme will impact him or her.
S/He should also be ‘efficient’ as administrators occupying positions of power and authority, it is their responsibility to translate policies into programmes, to implement schemes on the ground.
They need to be agile in their thoughts and actions. For eg. they should be able to access the latest information and knowledge and use them for improving service delivery.
They should be impartial and incorruptible as also observed by Sardar Patel and should work for an inclusive national development as mandated by the Constitution.
They should behave in a dignified manner and have the ability to patiently listen and take a balanced view. They must eschew arrogance and authoritarianism and be able to approach even the most intractable issues and irritants with a calm demeanour.
In each case, you have to give examples in ethics answers. That is a must.
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A very good intro.
While you discussed various points in the 2nd part of the answer, the example is missing at each point.
That is not the ideal case.
Ethics answers need ample amount of examples in static portions.
Hence make it a point of giving some real-life examples.
The language is decent and well explained points
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From where are you guys getting this idea of the consolidated fund of India and public servant? A peon in your municipality is also a public servant but h/she is not getting a salary from CFI? Isn’t it?
Please avoid such factual and conceptual mistakes at this level. Especially in the starting of your answer. You have to make sure that your every statement is of a certain maturity and correct.
A public servant is generally a person who is employed directly or indirectly by the government, either through appointment or election. This is the definition of a public servant.
The 2nd part os better.
But do give proper examples in each case.
Good explanation.
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Not to provide what? The intro statement is perhaps incomplete.
It is good that you discussed the discussion of various thinkers on the expected roles of a public servant as well.
This will give credence to your whole answer while giving you an edge over others.
Keep it up.
Very good content all in all.
The explanation is superb.
The structure and direction are nice.
can i upload the answer now will it be corrected
Hi Aruna
Sorry but the program is off hence the answers submitted for backdated AWEs cannot be reviewed as of now. The new phase will start from June onwards and you can get the details from here:
https://www.civilsdaily.com/course/daily-answer-writing/