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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ agricultural-reforms-farm- laws-farmers-protest-msp- 7134233/ - In the intro, cite figure about the water usage for agriculture to highlight the excessive use of resources.
- In the body, discuss the areas in which science and technology could help for example- research for reducing water usage, increasing yields of coarse grain crops to replace wheat and rice, genetic engineering and gene-editing technology to deal with the pests etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to increase the expenditure on R&D as India spends only 0.7 to 0.8 per cent of GDP on it.
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Hi RR
Good intro.
Challeneges are discussed in a decent manner.
In the suggeated strategy, mention some government initiatives like Pradhan Manthri Fasal Bima Yojana and the mega food park scheme.
Good conclusion.
Use subheadings for better presentation.
Keep working hard.
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Good intro.
In the challenges, you can give facts like Indian total factor productivity growth remains below 2% per annum; in contrast, China’s total factor productivity growth is about 6% per annum, even though China also has smallholding farmers.
Good content.
Way froward is suggested in a decent manner.
Good conclusion.
Keep working hard.
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Hi SRP
Good intro.
After the introduction, give a proper heading to refrain from monotony.
In this case you can give heading- Challenges to crop productivity in India.
Content is there but need to present it in a better way.
Underline keywords and use subheadings in the way forward.
Keep working hard.