Mentors Comments:
1. Define cryptocurrency. Giving examples of Bitcoin and Libra recently
2. List the economic, security, governance and technological benefits offered by cryptocurrencies
3. Mention the challenges posed by mainstreaming them – governance, security and crime-related
4. Provide suggestions to gain from them while not succumbing to the side effects
https://www.livemint.com/opinion/online-views/cryptocurrencies-could-constrain-a-country-s-choices-1567447742065.html
Answer:
A cryptocurrency is a digital or virtual currency that uses cryptography for security. Many cryptocurrencies are decentralized systems based on blockchain technology. The most common cryptocurrencies are Bitcoin, Ethereum, etc.
However, The Inter-Ministerial Committee on Virtual Currency constituted under the Chairmanship of Subhash Chandra Garg has recommended that cryptocurrency cannot be used as legal tender or currency at any place in India.
The Cryptocurrencies are gaining popularity due to benefits it provides which are as follows-
1. Privacy Protection: The use of pseudonyms conceals the identities, information and details of the parties to the transaction – perquisites for privacy enthusiasts.
2. Cost-effectiveness: They have single valuation globally, and the transaction fee is extremely low, being as low as 1% of the transaction amount. Cryptocurrencies eliminate third party clearinghouses or gateways, cutting down the costs and time delay. All the transactions over cryptocurrency platforms, whether domestic or international, are equal.
3. Lower Entry Barriers: Cryptocurrencies lowers entry barriers, they are free to join, high on usability and the users do not require any disclosure or proof for income, address or identity.
4. Alternative to Banking Systems and Fiat Currencies: Cryptocurrencies offer the user a reliable and secure means of exchange of money outside the direct control of national or private banking systems.
5. Fast and efficient: Fund transfer is easier and faster with cryptocurrencies as compared to conventional.
6. Open Source Methodology and Public Participation: A majority of the cryptocurrencies are based on open source methodology, their software source code is publicly available for review, further development, enhancement, and scrutiny.
7. Immunity to Government-led Financial Retribution: Governments have the authority and means to freeze or seize a bank account, but it is infeasible to do so in the case of cryptocurrencies. For citizens in repressive countries, where governments can easily freeze or seize the bank accounts, cryptocurrencies are immune to any such seizure by the state.
8. Counterfeiting: It is created by cryptography and uses blockchain technology and hence is much harder to counterfeit than paper currency.
The associated concerns are as follows-
Despite these numerous advantages and user-friendly processes, cryptocurrencies have their own set of associated risks in the form of volatility in valuation, lack of liquidity, security and many more.
Fluctuation in value: cryptocurrencies has seen very high fluctuation in their values because it depends on supply and demand. This results in fluctuation in the wealth of cryptocurrency holders.
Cryptocurrencies are being denounced in many countries because of their use in grey and black markets. There are two sets of interconnected risks; one being to the growth and expansion of these platforms in the uncertain policy environment, and the other being the risks these platforms pose to the users and the security of the state.
They also have the potential use for Illicit Trade and Criminal Activities and can be used for Terror Financing.
They also have the Potential for Tax Evasion.
Energy consumption: With an increase in mining of cryptocurrencies, there has been an increase in energy consumption as well. It was reported that, on November 2017, the power consumed by the entire bitcoin network was higher than that of Ireland. This will have an impact on power production, consumption, power prices, global warming, etc.
The future and further success of cryptocurrencies depends upon the way regulatory frameworks are devised. Different countries have approached this innovation in different ways, and therefore the regulatory environment remains uncertain. The government will have to take considered steps, given the risks from possible use of cryptocurrencies in terror financing, money laundering and tax evasion.
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Hi Wasim
Break the intro into two parts because of the length of the intro.
Underline important points in your answer more prominently.
The structure is decent.
But more dimensions could have been explored.
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2nd part is better dealt.
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Try not to discuss everything in the intro. Simply introduce the topic there and then jump to the main body of the answer.
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But they need to be placed in a better manner.
Underline important points in your answers.
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Read the model answer for the 1st part.
The 2nd part is decent in terms of content and dimensions.
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Underline important points in your answer.
Good handwriting.
The strategy that you used in the benefit section needs to be altered because of the lack of space in the answer sheet.
Simply use bullet points after subheadings and you can use those short headings before each bullet points if needed.
The direction of the answer is good but you need to explain less at certain points. That is the whole idea of bullet points.
The dimensions discussed in the 1st part are very good.
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Very good answer.
All the necessary parts have been answered.
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Keep paragraphs only for intro and conclusion.
I am talking about way forwards. That will make the answer more relevant.
The content has no problem anywhere.
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Better way forwards are needed.
Decent main body discussion.
Could have added more dimensions like social and poverty in the 1st part.
Mentors’ comments give you a loose idea of the approach. Don’t totally stick to the dimensions mentioned in them. You can add more dimensions apart from those.
Read the model answer for more dimensions in the 1st part.
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Good intro.
Weak 1st part.
The rest of the answer is fine.
In the 1st part, more points are needed. Dimensions are less explored.
Read the model answer.
the 2nd part is managed really well.
The language and explanation is good overall.
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The content is superb.
The dimensions covered in both parts are very good.
Underline important points.
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Highlight all subheadings. The 2nd part has subheading lost in the overall discussion.
Apart from the presentation, no issues in the answer.
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Points are well explored and crisply explained.
Coverage has the necessary depth and width.
Good ending.
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