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- https://www.thehindu.com/opinion/op-ed/the-hype-over-hypersonics/article30659477.ece
- In intro briefly state what the term hypersonic means in the conventional sense.
- In the body, explain the new developments being made by the various countries in technology and how the vehicles travelling at the speed which is many time the speed of sound can make the missile defence systems unreliable option to defend oneself against such weapon delivery systems. Also, explain how China developing the same technology matters for India in terms of disturbance of balance.
- In conclusion, state the need for speeding up the development of such technology for India in the face of the threats from China.
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After you have discussed the basic features of the Avangard, then no need to again point out that Russia has developed it and it can fly over 20 times the speed of the sound. You have already made these points in your intro and the features of the missile.
Try not to duplicate your efforts. They waste your time, space and energy while giving no marks for them.
The overall coverage is nice.
Your attempt has covered all the necessary arguments in both the parts.
The content is well-drafted with decent structure.
The way forward is only the sore point in this answer. Could have been more detailed in the end.