Mentor’s Comment:
- In the intro, briefly describe the articles in the Constitution which provides for the CAG.
- In the body, describe the functions and various duties performed by the CAG and importance of these functions for the country. Explain how in India, CAG only functions as Auditor and does not perform the role of Comptroller in true sense.
- In conclusion, state the importance of the office of CAG.
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When you mention any committee or commission then do mention their recommendations as well. Otherwise, there is no point in taking their name. Hence do mention what is the recommendations by Vinod Rai Committee.
The rest of the answer is satisfactory in terms of the content.
The overall answer is well attempted.
The points are relevant and they hit the bull’s eye.
The content is deep yet crisp.
The language is very good.
Do underline important points.
Also, your writing style will make the whole answer monotonous if you do not use some sort of diagram or flowchart in between. These are called bringing X factors in your answers. So to avoid the monotonicity of the points after points, you can use these little things in your answers.
All in all, a very good answer.
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Perfect intro.
The 1st part of the answer, where you discussed the role of Indian CAG, is too bulky. No need to discuss too many points there. For example, just a couple of statements would suffice in your explanation on CAG is only doing auditing in India. No need to discuss this deep in that part of the answer.
Try to avoid framing lengthy statements. That affects the essence of points.
Your overall theme and the direction of the answer is perfectly fine.
You understood the demand of the question perfectly and based your content according to it.
Apart from some overtly lengthy discussion in some parts, the overall answer is fine.
Good use of tabular form of presentation to demarcate the difference between the CAG counterparts in India and Britain.
Good conclusion.
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Which article of the Indian constitution deals with the office of CAG?
Never use subheading with the content of your answer (like you did in the intro by writing “Its Functions”). Write the subheadings separately.
Before moving on to discuss the difference between the role of CAGs in India and Britain, briefly, discuss the importance of the functions of CAG for the country. Explain how in India, CAG only functions as Auditor and does not perform the role of Comptroller in true sense.
The 2nd part needs better presentation than the present one.
Always tabular form when discussing any difference between two different sets Also you could bullet points but never use paragraph styled presentation in discussing differences.
The overall explanation is decent but more content and dimensions are needed as I have mentioned.
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Always underline imp points in your answer.
Also. highlight your subheadings prominently.
The discussion in the 2nd part lacks depth and need more content.
You have to give more points like how UK CAG is a member of the parliament, UK CAG presents the reports in the parliament etc. This is clearly mentioned in the question a prominent demand and hence more content is needed.
In a 15 marks question , never give so less points under any subheading. Each subheading should have at least 5 6 bullet points.
No need to discuss the issue or limitations of the CAG.
Also, there is no need to discuss the role of CAG towards the end of the answer once again when you have already discussed the same thing in the 1st part of the answer.
Hence the structure of the answer needs rework.
The overall direction of the answer is fine but the execution is not.
The 1st part of the answer has decent content.
manyof my answers are not checked sir
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