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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ national-digital-health- mission-harsh-vardhan- healthcare-sector-7218715/ - In the body, mention the objectives of the National Digital Health Mission.
- In the body, mention issues such as pathways to define public good so that digitisation facilitate better diagnosis and management, balancing public good with individual rights, concerns and benefits with linking digital identities etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to address these issues while we proceed with the digitisation of health.
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Hi Deepika
Good intro.
Objectives are discussed in a decent manner.
In the way forward, you can also write that the failure of a similar National Health Service (NHS) in the United Kingdom must be learnt lessons from and the technical and implementation-related deficiencies must be proactively addressed prior to launching the mission on a pan India scale.
Substantiate your content with examples.
Good structure.
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Hi Komal
Good intro.
You have explained the vision in a decent manner but try to summarise it and substatiate the challenges in 1-2 lines each.
Content is good, but use subheadings for better presentation.
In the way forward, you can also write that the standardisation of NDHM architecture across the country will need to find ways to accommodate state-specific rules. It also needs to be in sync with government schemes like Ayushman Bharat Yojana and other IT-enabled schemes like Reproductive Child Health Care and NIKSHAY etc.
Good structure.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Surya
Good intro.
After the intro, give a heading-Vision and briefly write about it.
Rest of the answer is well written, in the way forward you can mention that the standardisation of NDHM architecture across the country will need to find ways to accommodate state-specific rules. It also needs to be in sync with government schemes like Ayushman Bharat Yojana and other IT-enabled schemes like Reproductive Child Health Care and NIKSHAY etc.
Give headings and subheadings to fetch better marks.
Keep writing.