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- Discuss the energy needs in the Indian economy.
- Briefly give the current status of Nuclear Energy in India.
- Argue for and against nuclear energy as a source of energy to meet the needs of the economy while keeping in mind the safety and waste issues.
- Give your opinion and suggest a way forward.
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The intro should have at least one line regarding the main topic of the question which is NUCLEAR ENERGY.
The 1st part of the answer is decent and the use of flowchart is decent.
But the 2nd part, where you discussed the issues lacks to the point content.
The issues which are not the main demand of the question (like reserve or expenses) can be discussed in another subheading like “other issues with nuclear energy.” But the main discussion here should be regarding safety and waste management.
The answer lacks a proper way forward.
Also in the conclusion, the ending should be regarding the steps that govt has already taken in safety and waste management and end on the optimistic tone regarding future endeavours of govt in this regard.
Read the questions carefully and align your content according to the core demand of the question.
Please review…