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- In the introduction, briefly explain the case study.
- In the body discuss the key points-technical as well as managerial that you should get information about in order to give proper and adequate information to the public. Explain how you will approach the issue as an in-charge of engineering department. Also mention what information shall you divulge to the public so that it serves the legal and ethical purpose but at the same time saves yours and as well as the company’s reputation.
- Conclude with a balanced approach.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
Local media, government, community, and environment are also included in the stakeholders involved.
In the ethical issues, along with other points, write about the government apathy.
First action should be to minimize the damage in lowest possible time and money.
Since conditions of construction is difficult during snow, I would look for alternatives to run the operations of company till the vessels is reconstructed. This would help the employees and the company from being unemployed.
Write about the importance of emotional intelligence in this case.
Although your content is good but think little broad.
Keep writing , you will improve.
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Hi Dakshina
Lackluster introduction, do not write the course of action instead briefly explain the case study.
Make a flow chart for writing the stakeholders involved, this will save you space as well as will make your answer more presentable.
You have explained the ethical issues involved in a good manner.
The content is good and well placed.
Also write that you would request the management of company to use the company’s CSR funds to take care of the damage caused to the community by rebuilding the town.
Rest of the content is good.
A decent attempt.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Parakh
Try to complete your answer in maximum two pages, adhere to word limit.
Good introduction.
You have explained the stakeholders and ethical issues involved in a good manner.
Merge ethical dilemma and ethical issues to save your words.
The possible approaches are well explained , but need to summarise your content.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt, deducting your marks for not adhering to word limit.
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Hi Chester
Write proper introduction, briefly explain the case study.
Follow a proper structure.
After the introduction, write the stakeholders and ethical issues involved in the case study.
Then write the possible approaches with their merits and demerits.
Then conclude with the balanced and fair approach.
Write about the importance of emotional intelligence in this case.
Your course of action is decent but write other things also.
Underline keywords.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Unnati
Do not give heading in the introduction, simply write a small paragraph to explain the case study.
After writing the stakeholders involved, write the ethical issues involved , you can give points like lack of accountability, government apathy etc.
Rest of the answer is well written.
The content is decent and well placed.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting, write neat and legible.
Keep working hard !
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Hi PS
Good introduction.
Use of flow chart in explaining the stakeholders involved and their actions, is appreciable !
After writing the stakeholders involved, write the ethical issues involved , you can give points like lack of accountability, government apathy etc.
Along with other points, also write that In situations of distress, it is quite common for people to lose their calm and act in a vitiated manner, especially if there are personal losses. The key here is to use the emotional intelligence on your part to respond and not react.
Good conclusion.
A good attempt.
Avoid spelling mistakes.
Keep writing, you will succeed.