Mentor’s comment-
- In the introduction briefly discuss the case study.
- In the body, mention what your immediate action will be given the situation. Explain the importance of emotional intelligence in handling the issue. Then highlight the steps that you would take so that such incidents are not repeated in the future.
- Conclude with a fair and balanced approach.
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Hi Divya
First thing, adhere to word limit.
Stakeholders involved are decently written.
In the steps taken, you can write about bringing behavioral changes among the public.
Good conclusion.
A decent attempt.
You have good understanding of the subject, keep enriching it !
Be persistent, you will succeed.