Mentor’s comment-
- In the introduction briefly state the facts of the case.
- In the body explain the provision of social audit for MGNREGA. Discuss the possible events of actions you would take as an EO; Throw light on the virtues of courage and uprightness and need for showing virtues.
- Conclude with suitable solution to address the issue at hand.
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Hi Parakh
In the introduction, mention crony capitalism, corruption and conflict of interests.
Before writing the steps , first write about your duties under the MGNREGA act as an executive officer. In that, you can write duties like ensuring baseline surveys to assess work demand, maintaining proper accounts of the resources received, released and utilised , grievance redressal etc.
In the steps, write under two subheadings, immediate and long term, this will make your answer more structured.
Focus on accountability and transparency in the measures.
Lackluster conclusion, highlight the importance of MGNREGA Act also.
Avoid using short forms like dept .
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Taran
Lackluster introduction, case is about crony capitalism, conflict of interests and corruption.
Do not come directly to steps.
Write about the stakeholders involved, ethical issues , then write about your duties under the MGNREGA act as an executive officer. In that, you can write duties like ensuring baseline surveys to assess work demand, maintaining proper accounts of the resources received, released and utilised , grievance redressal etc.
Give a proper structure to your answer.
Brainstorm before writing.
Add points like you will temporary hold on the upcoming projects as there was favouritism and crony capitalism involved in the past projects, you would make the process of bidding for projects more transparent by using e-Technology etc.
Add diverse content to your answer.
Work on concluding remarks.
Improve your handwriting and basic grammar.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Deepika
Adhere to word limit, try to complete your answer in two pages.
You can make a flow chart of the stakeholders and ethical issues involved to save your space.
Lackluster introduction, the case study is about crony capitalism, corruption and ethical dilemma.
Stakeholders and ethical issues involved are well explained.
First write about your duties under the MGNREGA act as an executive officer.
Then write about the steps you will take.
Along with the steps, also write how will you ensure the accountability and transparency in the MGNREGA Act.
Lackluster conclusion, highlight the importance of MGNREGA Act also.
Keep writing !
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Hi NJ
Lackluster introduction, case study is about crony capitalism, ethical dilemma and corruption.
After writing the stakeholders involved, write about your duties under the MGNREGA act as an executive officer.
In the steps, write under two subheadings, immediate and long term, this will make your answer more structured.
Also write how will you ensure the accountability and transparency in the MGNREGA Act.
Good conclusion.
Add content to your answer.
Keep working hard !
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Hi Uttam
Good introduction.’
No need to write the social audit provisions in such detail.
Write the stakeholders involved in the case study, then mention your duties and steps you will take ,then conclude.
Give a structure to your answer.
Add diverse points like use of vigilance , various mechanisms to curb corruption, you would make the process of bidding for projects more transparent by using e-Technology etc.
Work on content.
Read mentor’s comment before writing, it will help you in writing good answers.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Work on handwriting and basic grammar.
Keep writing,you will improve.
MNREGA act was enacted to provide a fix number of working days surety to the unskilled people and guaranteed wages along with creation of social infrastructure. Any wrong doings in this process, will deprive the poor people from getting the job, will create pseudo infrastructure which will hinder the economy. I will make the main objective of this act to fail and will increase the corruption.
In this situation, I will not approve it. Standing with courage and integrity during the crisis period is most important thing. I will face the real threat and not to act on their will which is wrong.
I will do the following thing in my capacity:
1. Will do the social Audit
2. Cancel the fund already allocated to the project which doesn’t exists in real
3. Will start the legal action in my capacity under MNREGA act furnishing all the evidences I have collected
4. Will inform my higher management and take advice
5. Will use digital media to sensitize the public about the wrongdoings happening under MGNREGA work
Hi Shambhu
Write on A4 size sheets .
First write what the case study is all about, mention the stakeholders involved in the case study, then mention your duties and steps you will take ,then conclude.
Give a structure to your answer to get better marks.
There is no need of heroism, in the steps first you will ask for police protection then you take further actions.
Brainstorm before writing.
Rest of the steps are quite good.
Conclude by highlighting the importance of MGNREGA Act.
Work on content.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Dakshina
Lackluster introduction, first write what this case study is all about then write the duties of the officer.
Work on headings and subheadings, instead of writing ‘issues at stake’ you can write ethical issues involved.
You have the written all the possible steps in the course of action, instead write possible steps then write what will you do in the given situation.
Along with complaints, write what steps will you take for ensuring accountability and transparency in the working of MGNREGA Act, like use of e-technology, strengthening vigilance etc.
Brainstorm before writing.
Work on content an cover broader perspectives.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Unnati
Good introduction.
The question is not demanding the provisions of MGNREGA .
Adhere to the demand of the question, read mentor’s comment before writing !
Steps are quite good , keep it up, distribute them in immediate and long term to give a better structure to your answer.
Lackluster conclusion, highlight the importance of MGNREGA Act.
Improve your handwriting, differentiate between your ‘s’ and ‘r’.
Work hard, you will improve.
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Hi Chester
Lackluster introduction, briefly state the facts of the case.
Write the stakeholders involved.
Course of action is decent.
Work on concluding remarks,also highlight the importance of MGNREGA .
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Avoid using short forms like w.r.t.
Work on basic grammar and sentence formation to get better marks
Do not get demotivated by the marks, keep writing,you will improve.