Mentor’s comment-
- In the introduction start by briefing the case and introduce the issue and ethical angles involved.
- In the body list down the facts in the case and the associated challenges like – honor killing, schoolmates being victim, family pressure, caste system etc. Discuss the possible steps that you would take.
- Conclude with a fair and balanced solution to the given situation.
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Hi Samiksha
Good introduction.
You have explained the stakeholders involved in a good manner but in ethical issues write issues like empathy and compassion for weaker section, peace and harmony in society, lack of tolerance, injustice meted out to youths who marry different caste partner etc.
In the course of action, also write about behavioural changes like you can write that you would request to create awareness among the villagers against caste discrimination and ills against the inter-caste marriages etc. by being an active part of it.
Work on different aspects.
Improve presentation to fetch better marks.
Keep writing !