Mentor’s comment-
- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/covid- crisis-employment-education- skill-universities-6458972/ - Employment has been a recurring theme of the UPSC papers. Consider 2014 question ” “While we flaunt India’s demographic dividend, we ignore the dropping employability” What are we missing while doing so? Where will the jobs that India desperately needs come from? Explain.
- So, in this question, in your intro, you should cite figures about the low employability of Indian youth from any employability report.
- In the body, focus on the issues that skill education in India faces-such as regulatory issues, financing issues, placement issues etc.
- In suggestions, regulatory changes, proper financing and use of technology can be included.
- Conclude by stressing how focusing on skill education through skill universities could contribute to increasing the skills and employability of Indian youth.
Please review the answer.
Hi Dakshina
What is profit national educational policy ?
Brainstorm before writing.
Lackluster introduction
In this you can cite some figures of low employability in India etc.
The task word of the question is skill universities and you did not mention anything about it.
Always read mentor’s comment before writing.
Work on presentation.
Avoid using short forms in your answer.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Chester your content is good
write in brief that hoe skill universities can help in increasing employability of Indian youth.
write in short about the issues faced by skill education in India so that you can diversify your
answer within the given limit.
as the question mention skill universities so give focus on that,do not write general answer about skill education.
overall good answer
well structured
keep it up.
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Good introduction.
Underline only keywords.
You have discussed the body of the answer in a decent manner but
also mention briefly why skill universities are important.
Work on presentation,your answer should look neat.
Avoid spelling mistakes.
Lackluster conclusion,conclude by stressing the need of skill universities.
Keep writing.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
In the body,mention briefly why skill universities are important and how they can solve
the problem of unemployment in India.
Try to understand the demand of the question.
You can read mentor’s comment for that.
Conclusion is good.
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Hi Aastha
Your introduction is good .
You have discussed the answer in a decent manner.
Well structured answer.
You can also mention briefly how skill universities will help in tackling the unemployment problem of India.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep it up.
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Hi Vishesh
Your introduction is good.
As the question has mentioned skill universities so mention briefly why skill universities are important.
Some good points but need to diversify your answer.
Read mentor’s comment and use it for headings and subheadings.
Avoid using short forms .
Work on basic grammar and spellings.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Vinay
In introduction,mention about Indian youth not about engineers only.
In the body of the answer,you have discussed only issues,there is no way forward or suggestions.
Suggest how skill education can help in solving the unemployment problem of India.
Also mention how skill education can be imparted.
Conclusion is good.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Parakh
Try to write introduction according to mentor’s comment,it will help you in writing good introduction.
Avoid drawing a line between introduction and the body of the answer.
Good use of flow chart,keep it up.
You have deviated from the demand of the question.
Mention the importance of skill universities and how skill education can help in solving the unemployment problem of India.
Brainstorm before writing.
Avoid using short forms.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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